You say you've changed,
I don't see how.
but
destiny has become,
at once, too loud.
Your clipping words
puncture thick skin
Seen it all -
no apology, again.
Abit of this, some of that...
- Typewriter
- Once upon a time there was a girl who liked writing poetry. One day, she wanted to share a short poem with a friend and did so in the quickest way she knew how; via a text message. Immediately this created a tangible form that had to be followed by function. Character limit and the universal language of SMS with the line breaks and lack of font-freedom threatened to quash originality. However, she persevered, and here today you can see some of those results. Her name is Rosie, and she would be glad to hear of your opinions and thoughts on her short poems. Maybe, if you send her an email with a phone number, you might get your very own one day.
Literary-slanted others!
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before you focus on that right before youmoment it's that oneyou have herebefore you--
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I got a note: ~~~ Hi Moonrat, I have a book deal with a lovely indie publisher. I don't have an agent. *cowers and hides under table* I know you despise us...
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• I’m Chato Mamet Treviño. I’m a Boston Terrier. I was born like 6 or 7 years ago. In October I think. I remember seeing a bunch of kids in costumes. Woof!...
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Textual Typewriting by RosieTypewriter (R.E.D.M.) is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 Unported License.
3 comments:
Hi Rosie I really like this poem it really speaks to me. I think its really good and that it's not just a poem. this To me feels like there is some one who is feeling this, living this and that she don't know how to say her feelings so instead she Converts her feelings into a poem. I think your are really good at this. So keep it up.
.....clo-ster
Thanks, Clo-ster! Comment much appreciated :) Lots of what I write is inspired by actual events, though sometimes they're not related directly to me, so you're right there. Though, don't you think putting feelings into a poem is still a type of communication/way of saying them?
-RT
That's allright and about the communication thing, yeah I guess so, but what I'm trying to say, is that it's a different way of communicating, it has a different sense if meaning, also it's a easier way of getting someone to understand exactly how you feel and to understand the event. I guess what I'm trying to say is that done people find it hard to Tell some one an event or even letting there emotions out, therefore by using a poem for this, the reader can truly have a sense of feeling of what it's about and how you feel, also some peopl fined it hard to talk about stuff within a conversation so by using a poem you can pick out the most effective or main parts an put them together and it allows the reader to gather a better understanding. It's abit like when artists sing about there lives if things that have happend within their life span, and do this to try and get other people to relies what they been feel and to feel their emotions within the song although the music background has a huge impact on this, the lyrics are what gives it meaning.
Clo-ster
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